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Bang BangShe placed two fingers against her temple. Bang bang. Who thought it would ever happen? She placed a plea for her life. Bang bang. We all knew it would never happen. She placed a tear for forgiveness. Bang bang. We saw the bullet cut through the air. She didn't want to die. Bang bang. And here she lay.A regular day, a regular boring day. Get up, get ready, get to school, suffer through classes, and get home. The same routine day in day out. Who knew that today everything would change? That second period on a cold January day would spell disaster for more than half of a school's population?No one knew but a dozen troubled teens hell bent on revenge.Everything started out normal, like it's supposed. I drag myself out of bed, moaning and groaning. I eat my breakfast, get dressed, brush my teeth and hair, pack my bag and bolt from the house. I walk to school, the cold winter air biting at any exposed skin. Twenty minutes later the bell chimes three times. The day has officially begun it
Bullied to DeathI am a victim. I have been bullied to death.Everyday is a torture, a nightmare that walks out of the shadows of the mind. Everyday is filled with monsters disguised as teens like me teens who hate me. Why am I so different? What have I done to be so different?I look into a mirror and the reflection that stares back is dark. Black hair frames pale skin and dull blue eyes. Fear hides behind those eyes and the smile worn every now and then. This is who I am. Why will no accept me for that?This is the end. I'm finished and I am not going down alone.In my dreams I see the dear plan of action. They will all suffer; they will all feel the pain I have felt for too long. Too long have I sat and listened to them, too long have I sat and done nothing. They will pay. I will make sure of that.Down one, down two, down three. I am immortal. I am God. Here my prayer and die at my feet. Bleed at my feet, I am the power behind this all. From then to now you will regret everything you have ev
How to get more from your commenters!If like me you crave critique and feedback, but only ever get "nice work" comments, here are some tips to get what you want!First of all, allow me to briefly elaborate on what I mean by critique and feedback.Critique - Noun, A detailed analysis and assessment of something.Someone who offers you a critique gifts you with a full evaluation of the good and bad parts of your piece, as well as offering ideas for its improvement.Feedback - Noun, Information about reactions to a product.They let you know which parts they like / don't like, and possibly how the piece made them feel.Comments such as "Great work!" "Awesome" don't fall into either of these categories. Reply to them with a question.Asking a question prompts a response. Not only that, but it forces them to take a look at your work again! Below are two screenshots where I have used this technique.Common questions you could ask in